The Most Improper Miss Sophie Valentine - Jayne Fresina

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It's a shame that a book with such a clever, unique blurb turned out so bog standard. Every HR trope appears to have been tossed into a blender and spat out into a plodding, confusing mess. Including, but not limited to, the following:


Gambling family member who has lost the family fortune

     Heroine must marry for money

Ugly duckling (mildly "disfigured" heroine treated like the Elephant Man)

Poor boy made good

Pining ex-lover

     Love triangle

Love at first sight

Reunited childhood sweethearts

Good People Have Good Sex

Meddling aunts

Mysterious past

Reformed thief

Fake names

Buried treasure

Plot moppet

Secret baby



It's incredibly uneven, starting off well but dragging through the middle. Then there are a half dozen sex scenes that all take place in the last quarter. Weirdly paced.


Sophie and Russ are fine characters, but they didn't light my world on fire. I understand the plot is that Sophie is torn between the girl she was and the woman she thinks she should be, but I still found her characterization spotty and inconsistent. I never felt there was a reason Russ had searched for her for so long. 


Again, it's not a bad book, just far more boring than the blurb would lead me to believe.